diff --git a/articles/goalstooearly.md b/articles/goalstooearly.md
index db34ae3..7afc3af 100644
--- a/articles/goalstooearly.md
+++ b/articles/goalstooearly.md
@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@ I'm in a pickle mentally; this is a situation in which I was never truly expecti
 I would like to preface with the fact that I have always put my best foot forward. Image is incredibly important to me,
 but work is paramount; if you are unable to hold up both to the best of your ability, I believe one will fail.
 
-## Past, Focus, and Dedication
+## Past In Leadership
 
 I started at a young age in Cub Scouts, before quickly climbing the ranks and moving on to Boy Scouts. I quickly became
 the troop's Assistant Senior Patrol Leader (ASPL), and I took on additional responsibilities such as leading troop
@@ -19,7 +19,7 @@ meetings, organizing campouts, miscellaneous administrative tasks, and teaching
 personal life skills.
 
 Past my scouting life, I have dedicated multiple years of my life to building safe-space communities for all on
-platforms such as Discord and in real life, even creating and leading the south's largest interest-based community.
+platforms such as Discord and in real life, even creating and leading the Southern US's largest interest-based community.
 
 ## You _will_ swim - sinking isn't an option.
 
@@ -35,7 +35,7 @@ will not rest until I have achieved my goals.
 This means that I am very often obsessing over small details on my work and do regularly end up re-writing my work or
 plans many times. The reward of having it _just right_ is absolutely worth the effort.
 
-## How did you maintain work?
+## Proving It
 
 I have maintained relative proof of my achievements and have been able to demonstrate my skills and work to a great many
 people. This is incredibly important and necessary; you may be able to vouch for yourself, but other people won't see
@@ -46,9 +46,9 @@ the medical industry at just 20 years old, and have achieved my lifelong dream o
 
 ## And what about nowadays?
 
-In all honesty, it feels kind of... empty, honestly, knowing you've achieved what you set out to do.
+In all honesty, it feels kind of... empty, knowing you've achieved what you set out to do.
 
-Work is good and fun, and I am very happy with where I am now and the work that I have to do. I've set myself up to be
+Work has been challenging me well, and I am thrilled with where I am now. I've set myself up to be
 able to comfortably live where I am and work on these projects, but I am finding that the lack of future goals is
 leaving me ambitionless.