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@@ -19,18 +19,21 @@ meetings, organizing campouts, miscellaneous administrative tasks, and teaching
 personal life skills.
 
 Past my scouting life, I have dedicated multiple years of my life to building safe-space communities for all on
-platforms such as Discord and in real life, even creating and leading the Southern US's largest interest-based community.
+platforms such as Discord and in real life, even creating and leading the Southern US's largest interest-based
+community. Over the years, this community grew to hosting 250+ members monthly at in-person events, with an additional
+social media presence spanning over 2,000 members. Some of my duties included running the group, coordinating logistics
+such as premiering guests on Netflix, flying musicians out to in-house events, working alongside large non-profit
+organizations such as Nashville Pride in partnership, and more.
 
 ## You _will_ swim - sinking isn't an option.
 
 _You are never too young to succeed. It just matters when you start._
 
-I am _incredibly_ hard on myself as an individual. This is generally not a good tactic to have on yourself, as it can
-cause failures to feel much worse than they actually are. I just haven't learned.
+I am _incredibly_ obsessed with ensuring I can deliver quality products. I strive for complexity and niche requirements;
+I find that I usually work best if I'm thrown into the fire with a good challenge for me.
 
 Part of my dedication to my craft is that I will dedicate 100% of my time and power to it. I take on projects as a
-personal mission every time if the project aligns with my interests; anything less than perfection means failure, and I
-will not rest until I have achieved my goals.
+personal mission every time if the project aligns with my interests; I will not rest until I have achieved my goals.
 
 This means that I am very often obsessing over small details on my work and do regularly end up re-writing my work or
 plans many times. The reward of having it _just right_ is absolutely worth the effort.
@@ -46,11 +49,12 @@ the medical industry at just 20 years old, and have achieved my lifelong dream o
 
 ## And what about nowadays?
 
-In all honesty, it feels kind of... empty, knowing you've achieved what you set out to do.
+In all honesty, it feels kind of... empty, knowing you've achieved what you set out to do. Call it a recalibration or
+"rebalancing" of sorts.
 
-Work has been challenging me well, and I am thrilled with where I am now. I've set myself up to be
-able to comfortably live where I am and work on these projects, but I am finding that the lack of future goals is
-leaving me ambitionless.
+Work has been challenging me well, and I am thrilled with where I am now. I've set myself up to be able to comfortably
+live where I am and work on these projects, but I am finding that I am now in the active process of defining exactly
+what my next ambition looks like.
 
 I am beyond happy and excited to shape my new future, and I look forward to contributing to amazing projects and
 spearheading innovation where I can.